BTW this is the no1 page women go to after the homepage, so it needs to nurture their journey.
Concentrate on building connection; & i’m not talking about telling them what your product or service is; this comes from -
▾ Tell them who you are, don’t mention your biz - who are you as a person? What things do you enjoy?
▾ Tell them a story about you, how did you end up doing your Souls Sunshine '(this is your biz idea/purpose) what happened to you that directed you to where you are today? What was your journey?
▾ Imagery - friendly, show you as a person, lifestyle photos (maybe with your baby, your dog, hiking, surfing etc) the more YOU you are, the more your dream audience will connect with you